SHCG: What a great spread! I love the photos, the title , the clock, the journaling, the titles on the photos! Love how you did the date and the thorn pp on the bottom!I think everything is great the way it is! Great lo!
SHCG: I never noticed this post in the critique thread until tonight. Sorry about that. I love the notebook paper and the clock with ribbon. I like the clean look to this spread and the dictionary entry. Spell check: separation. I feel the 10 years title could use more of a lift, and I probably would've used lowercase letters for the second ABC group, but those are minor suggestions. The phrases that accompany each photo and the three hole punches add even more interest.
SHCG - This is great, Michelle! I love the journaling on the spiral paper, the additional touches of torn looseleaf paper & the hole-punched mats - adds a very scholastic feel to this! Your journaling was poignant, I too experienced the "separation of people no longer present" at my reunion as well. I think the clean lines & orderly placement work well for this subject. I'm also glad you scrapped this; even if you don't remember details, you remember the fun & have the pics, & that counts for something! :)
shcg: some elements that I really like on this - the crumpled notebook border, the notebook paper for your journaling, the colors. I'm not too fond of the mounting of the photos with the hole punched border -- to me it is distracting. I think a plain mat would work better, IMO. So glad you did document this, even though you don't remember much about it anymore.
SHCG: Oh wow, my highschool reunion will also be coming up next year but I don't know f we have an actual reunioun... really hope that we do lol. t's nice that you have journaling on the page and I think that the way you mounted the pctures is cute. I also lke the way that you've used crumpled notebook paper across the bottom it looks very schoolish.
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