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Critique group layout.
This was done for a sketch challenge. I'm really regretting stamping the blue paper at top. The blue looked so plain that I'd hoped to add some interest. I wonder what I might have done instead (short of changing the paper since everything was already glued in place).

It's a bit hard to tell in this scan, but the small letters in the title read "like" (for Ladylike). I've added glue dots to the large letters in "lady" so they don't move around any more which they did when scanned.

The journalling is way too stiff so suggestions there would also be appreciated too. While I am not currently planning to re-do the page, it is still a possibility.

Thanks in advance for feedback.

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[b]Journaling reads:[/b]
[i]Fall, 2005
Libby really likes the dress she's wearing in this picture. It was one of her favorites all summer —she calls it her "old fashioned"dress. I guess it does have a vintage feel with its simples lines and red checked seersucker fabric. The best part of photographing her in it is that my self-proclaimed tomboy of a daughter felt compelled to cross her ankles and fold her hands daintily in her lap. There's no other word for it but ladylike.[/i]


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