Ember's Lullaby

stunning, just stunning

I like it the way it is!

Love the doodling and the journaling!

adorable! love the colors and flwoers!

Awesome doodling and use of negative space!

the doodling is great, and I love the polka dot flowers. I also love the little touches: the music notes and the title up at that top.

very pretty!

I agree with Gretchkal...one flourish (with maybe one of those pink flowers in it) under the title would make it stand out more and bring a little more to the top. Otherwise I think it's just perfect. Gorgeous actually.

I absolutely LOVE these colors together!

I really like this LO

I really like this. I think the title needs to be a little larger

stunning xx

This is really pretty. We all get lost sometimes. TFS

I think it's perfect just the way it is!

I think this is lovely! My only comment is that it seems a bit bottom heavy. I know you're trying the fun world of white space but don't forget our good friend balance. LOL My suggestion would be to draw more attention to your title - bolder lettering? Maybe a small flourish up in that corner? That would go a long way to making it feel completed. Otherwise, this is beautiful, as is! Excellent, and thank you for sharing! :)