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I really like how you've got the quote with the starburst coming out of it... I think there's a lot of good suggestions in here, but I'm drawing a blank about what I would do with it..

June 17, 2007

I'm not sure I like the dotted ribbon, maybe you could do some journaling on this LO, but I love the PP you have used, on the bottom of the pic you could put his name?

June 16, 2007

I like the idea of adding his personel information, some journaling strips in the upper left hand corner, right in the middle of the negative space, maybe overlaping a bit over the ribbon. I would add one star above that. The title is fine where it is. I like the quote and the star ribbon underneath.

June 16, 2007

Hmmm, my eye does go straight for the space in the upper left, I like the idea of adding some stars up there. I wouldn't change the black title, it matches his sweater, I love the colors you chose and the little starburst with the quote.

June 16, 2007

What if you moved the title to the left hand side and put some stars around it? I also agree with making sure that there is some personal info on the page! I really like the colors. I wouldn't change that. I also really like your pic placement!

June 16, 2007

I love it as is, but I agree, something small in the upper left would balance it. It really is beautiful though...a great design!

June 16, 2007

What a sweet face. Are you going to add personal info (name, dates, etc.)? My eyes are automatically drawn to the negative space in the upper left, not that it's a bad thing. Maybe 3 small stars in the upper left corner?

June 16, 2007

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