At DeeDee's

GDCG: I like what you've done with the ribbon however I'd add something brighter around the picture so that it stands out a little bit more.

September 17, 2009

GDCG: What an amazing way to use up that ribbon! I lvoe how you inked the edges of the strip of paper. The photo corners are really cute as well. I think the only thing to critique (sorry I hate to critique, but I'll try), is maybe contrasting the white strip in another color, because it blends into the white circle. I still think it's a fab LO!

September 16, 2009

GDCG: Your ribbon work is stunning. I think you could have done something to make the picture pop more. Other than that its a beautifully designed lo

September 09, 2009

I like how the circle is repeated through out the lo-pp,photo corners,even scallops on the journaling.

September 06, 2009

(GDCG)comment: love the focal point at the top with the ribbon critique: maybe some brown or black inking around the circle or some pen detailing

September 05, 2009

(GDCG) Really love how soft this LO is...I agree with the others about the dark pink ribbon standing out more. Great design!

September 04, 2009

(crit.group) I think this is a very cute lo. I do agree that the darker pink ribbon stands out more than the rest. I love the journaling box and the flower. Very nice.

September 02, 2009

(Critique Group) Very cute! While I do love the ribbon on the circle, I have to agree with what a couple of others have said. The brighter pink ribbon stands out much more than the others, I think this is because all the other colors in the lo are so muted, it takes away from the photo a bit. My eye is just drawn right to it. Otherwise, I think this is a beautiful lo!

September 02, 2009

(crit. group) Looks so sweet! I agree about the one dark pink ribbon, at least in the picture it catches the eye first instead of the picture.

September 02, 2009

Mandy, The dark pink ribbon stands out a bit more than the pale ribbons. You could either replace it with a paler color or add a darker ribbon in the center and the opposite end. Love the handprint, the polka dots and the photo corners.

September 02, 2009

Love the ribbon.

September 02, 2009

Very cute. I like the ribbon. Maybe add something more to the circle to make it less big and white. Some stamping or inking. Other than that it is really adorable.